Subject Analysis: The Ranger Creed

wrangler1352 · Post by **wrangler1352** » March 5th, 2005, 9:02 pm

Posed: wanna make a comment asshole!!!! (618)-922-XXXX FUCK YOU!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!

JdZorro · Post by **JdZorro** » March 5th, 2005, 9:06 pm

Very well done. I have a chill in my spine and a tear in my eye. You have a better understanding of the Creed than most RIPPEEs (at least in my day).
The only question now is can you live it? This is not a question to answer, it is a question to demonstrate. We'll know soon enough, and I wish you the best.
Just to live up to the Creed though, there was one mispelled word:
"But their comradely"
I probably should have made you hunt for it, but you did quote me, so I felt obligated.
Good work!

Poetryisdeath · Post by **Poetryisdeath** » March 5th, 2005, 9:08 pm

Piece of shit wrote:Posed: wanna make a comment asshole!!!! (618)-922-XXXX FUCK YOU!!!

I'd tell you that you suck. But you must already know that.

Wrangler? Who the fuck do you think you are? Sheep-shagging piece of shit. Go wrangle a fat hooker like your dad too.

I'll make a comment. :::EDITED BY ADMIN TO REMOVE INFLAMMATORY STATEMENT:::.

JdZorro · Post by **JdZorro** » March 5th, 2005, 9:10 pm

What the hell did I step in? I think something was stuck to the bottom of my shoe!

Poetryisdeath · Post by **Poetryisdeath** » March 5th, 2005, 9:14 pm

Ranger JdZorro, what's on your shoe would be the pathetic pile of shit who thinks that because he gives me a phone number, he's justified in being a dumb sumbitch.

Thank you, as well, Ranger JdZorro. I will do my best to prove that I live the creed. And I fixed the spelling error.

Earthpig · Post by **Earthpig** » March 6th, 2005, 8:44 pm

I am so impressed with what you wrote, that I would like to suggest that your work be posted in a prominent place somewhere on the site, where first time viewers could read it. With an understanding like you have for what the Creed represents, I don't see how you could fall short in your quest for the Tan Beret. Go get it!
RLTW
EP

Runner · Post by **Runner** » March 6th, 2005, 9:01 pm

Awesome, Thanks.

Hoover · Post by **Hoover** » March 6th, 2005, 9:06 pm

Ya' done Good there young man, take out that word "gun" and replace it with the word "weapon" and I think you've got a winner.
I'm personally not so worried about pargraphs, structure and such, it's the emotional content that really got me.
Job Well Done! RLTW....

Poetryisdeath · Post by **Poetryisdeath** » March 7th, 2005, 1:00 am

Thank you very much, Ranger Hoover, Ranger EarthPig, Ranger Cryhavoc, and Malarkey. It was as much of a pleasure to write as it was to post here. I also edited the word gun to weapon. I'd been yelled at by my recruiter for that as well.. doing 50 for forgetting.

KW Driver · Post by **KW Driver** » March 7th, 2005, 1:18 am

good job. just remember it as you move through your days. Like Earthpig said, go get it.

leok20 · Post by **leok20** » March 7th, 2005, 11:07 am

nice job kid, RLTW