Sample introduction - FAILURE

[rangerdick]

Hi all my name is rich i went to the recruiters yesterday looking for a11x contract but i got offered a ranger contract ive wanted one but never really looked to get one on accoumt of hard it its to get one i was happy to get the eleven x contract so i domt feel prepared i told that to the recruiter and said that makes me a better candidate cuz im not overestimate myself can i get an idea on how to increase my pt score sorry for.the vague question but i feel unprepared

[Steadfast]

Hi all my name is rich i went to the recruiters yesterday looking for a11x contract but i got offered a ranger contract ive wanted one but never really looked to get one on accoumt of hard it its to get one i was happy to get the eleven x contract so i domt feel prepared i told that to the recruiter and said that makes me a better candidate cuz im not overestimate myself can i get an idea on how to increase my pt score sorry for.the vague question but i feel unprepared

rangerdick (a civilian) has picked Ranger in his name against Board FAQ
Are you related to Hurley21?

Please DEP's do not make your introductions as poorly as this dumbass.
This is an example of what not to do.